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The New House

Sitting on the floor
Watching the moment pass by

Andrew is changing the locks on the doors of my new house
Eva and Carson are having a dance party in the empty living room

There’s no furniture
There’s no Wi-Fi

Just family
love
and peace

This house has never been more full.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson, Robert Frost, Allen Ginsberg, Walt Whitman , Misha Collins, John Donne

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