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Mar 06, 2025
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The New House
Sitting on the floor
Watching the moment pass by
Andrew is changing the locks on the doors of my new house
Eva and Carson are having a dance party in the empty living room
There’s no furniture
There’s no Wi-Fi
Just family
love
and peace
This house has never been more full.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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