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Jan 29, 2019
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New Year's Day
The old year is out
The new year is in
We all waited for it to begin
Now the new year is here to stay
Goodwill abounds
From friends and family all around
That this year will be
Better than the last gone past
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Last Few Words: Dear Neopoets Do you like my poem? Send me your comments. You can contact me at my email address ifeanyiiweze@yahoo.com Eulekia
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Cloudthings
6 years 3 months ago
Hiya
& how swiftly this year has flown by & this little gem has been sitting unnoticed... until now! I really like it. Simply straight forward - The only suggestion I might offer is to split the last line & thus take more advantage of that little rhyming couplet?
"The old year is out
The new year is in
We all waited for it to begin
Now the new year is here to stay
Goodwill abounds
From friends and family all around
That this year will be
Better than the last
gone past"