NIGHT NOISES (SUNKU)

midnight
bell tower
gong bang delight

trolleys
twirl waltz time
in moonbeam bright

High sky
piccolo
sings lullaby

sewer
viola
steam minor key

poet’s
candle-lit
orchestra pit

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Being asked to give it a try. 2/3/4 syllables in repeated verses.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Washington DC

Favorite Poets: D.Thomas, Stevens, Eliot, Blake, Rimbaud, Oliver, Delmore Schwartz, Neruda, Marti, Commings, Moore, Cohen, Merwin, Borges, Breton, Baudelaire, Sabines, Voznesensky, Eluard, Oliver,

Comments

raj

7 years 4 months ago

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IRiz

7 years 4 months ago

sounds of night town!

sounds of night town!
very clever and fresh alive imagery
thank you for sharing your poem