ninety parts to God

the soul wakes........... forced devalue
festival minds preventing them derivation
this was some inundate carnage
squeal and sobriety pertinent
immobilized foraging of those partook

surrender into invisibility
for on earth if recall be
after the penance of fate adjourn them
from much needed time to grow old
deficit kids- were exclusive saints
for this cause. About faith,
what is this whiplash whirlpool
dragging much more participants than enrolled
discipleship of fireball, inhuman inferno

they become the divine accomplice
in pieces nether, a rake to gather
much more fragments, lying in state exhortation
for terrorism, macabre immutable
should they seek the purpose of lower breeds
like worms who have no scientific guru
of human to human predators

About This Poem

Last Few Words: this poem is about an explosion of bomb by terrorists, and the victimized humans shatter well even beyond fragments to gather their wasted being for funeral, this is really a sagging scenario of mans inhumanity to his fellow man, regardless of the fact that on earth man is the highest breed both mentally , and otherwise but here their wisdom is still lacking.they go to their maker in millions of tiny pieces unthinkable . the culprits of the crime were also brain washed by religion

Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft