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May 07, 2016
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Nix The Dynomometer
Her chassis sway
can't be duplicated
or deconstructed
or impersonated.
Reverse engineering,
kinesthetics,
or computer modeling
still don't get it.
She owns it,
she knows it,
and uses it to her delight,
knowing damn well it's delighting everyone else too.
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Comments
Keith Logan
9 years 2 months ago
Love this
but maybe not quite everyone, just every male.
brittle light
9 years 2 months ago
thanks Keith
thanks Keith
I think females also take delight, but sometime just mask it well with other covering reactions.
... not much negative attitudes from females toward Marilyn Monroe, or Gina Lollobrigida...and, man, could they sway and sashay!
(yup, the examples are from from the era of my youth!)
Keith Logan
9 years 2 months ago
Depends..
When it's screen goddesses they can desire to emulate them but when closer to home?