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Sep 21, 2014
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No hole in truth
you have murderous tendencies do you
you killed a fly where as you could have shared ...
she could have been served...
on the news paper
with which you killed her
sections one to five
will be held against you ...
where ever are you...
only one call is due to you.....
call your legal advisor....
if all humans kill flies
then how will we all fly ...
no lies
flies have big eyes...
they can be used as spies ..
friends take care
when you kill a fly ...
but the judge will exonerate you...
as you spoke the truth...
there's no hole
in your truth!
Hello Jess where r u?
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
10 years 9 months ago
what can I say?
I love it!
Alid
lovedly
10 years 9 months ago
u said it. beeeeee f o rrrrr eeeeeeee
a cup of tea
rather a glass full
with two kettles whistling
free tea for you
debit to ur credit card
that will surely dooodo
Ian.T
10 years 9 months ago
Loved
One of those pieces Jess would love to read a good write young Bard, sections one to five, would be better than numbers if you mindeth not using words.
Take care young man, walking with you as always,
Yours, Ian
lovedly
10 years 9 months ago
and where is Jess
not how??