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Nov 19, 2010
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redemption?
...from what?
I am a man
and if you say "in the image of god"
I say "I am that I am"
repentence?
...for what?
my will is free
where is the freedom in guilt?
awareness understands
the predicaments of man
newer mind does not demand
reparation from the old
no acts of contrition shall be imposed
the only sin is sorrow
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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scribbler
13 years 7 months ago
hello
Like the form and texture of this message. It might read with more power with line breaks after each question mark....................stan