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May 17, 2022
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Nostalgic clap, clap dance
What a lovely dance you portray
nostalgia overcame me reading this
as I once held her close and tight
right in the middle of the floor
all glared with open wild and wide eyes
as they saw,...
I pulled her in and tickled her here and there
unmindful of the others glare
they all did smile and stare
then clapped as I kissed her
then and there
as a teenager
who wouldn’t mind
a Frenchy of any kind
as we left the floor
towards the door...
claps we heard from all on the floor
you have done me a favour
remembered our maiden dance
my first LOVE
now my wife
we still dance
as
life ages. on...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 1 month ago
dear lovedly,
in S1 L2 over came (overcame) is all one word
as they saw,...... as they saw... (an ellipses is just three dots)
this is a very sweet poem, is it a real remembrance? or created out of that wonderful imagination of yours?
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
yes Cats rhanks
errors yeah and story half half ha ha
composed long ago
lovedly
3 years ago
where is GEE
Two lighter poems u haven't yet glanced
on the dancing floors
of my merry life