Nostalgic Dream IncrediblyTrue

She told me she loved
no no no no -crush
you are very much older
but for you I have some kind of love
about that later
she blushed

Missed her from her teens
so many years later
last night she came in my dream
rested her head on my shoulder
soft and supreme

I brushed her aside and said
'tis too late
now I'm so much more older
she blushed again like last time
silently smiled

my eyes opened wide
there was none beside
perhaps she just implied

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Can a dream be so true a decade gone away I wonder...

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

This is poignant Lovely.

This is poignant Lovely. Sometimes I wish my dreams could be true then I could talk to my Ma and Pa again.

Lovely work keep it up!!!

Love Always Sis xxx

lovedly

2 years 5 months ago

She was

stunningly beautiful
very young
but when one loves
age is just a number
we vibed

But the reality one must face
we were physically years apart
so my dream too sustained me

I loved
but then there was nothing but
poetic imagery
so really nostalgic

LIFE IS LIKE THAT

I don't think we will ever meet
times flowing on a VIKING

May she be blessed
having shared her sensory memories
with me

Thanks ma'am

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

I really like that theme. You treated it in the normal Lovedly fashion. I have a certain timbre I use in my head when I read your poems. I feel like they need to be spoken not read. I feel this way with a lot of free verse. I like the disjointed nature of the style. I also dislike the disjointed nature of the style. It’s ambiguous for many readers though I don’t find your work to be that way. Your line breaks usually make it pretty clear.

Tim