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Dec 17, 2021
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NOT NEW Evanescence from my archives 2018
Evanescence
the heart fears
the loss of someone
once so loved
would we lose all memory
a loved one lost to eternity
in moments
like a rainbow in the sky
after a brief rainy storm
just comes and vanishes
in a moment
like the rainbow
across the Niagara mist
does
Evanescent
sense of fragrance it does leave
but fading memory a fear breeds
will ye forget the one that came
but now has gone
a young one
just of three days
only
lost her mommy
sad isn't it
but it's destiny
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
3 years 6 months ago
very
succinct lol
lovedly
3 years 6 months ago
Stan please
now review thanks