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Jul 27, 2020
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Not trying is worse than trying
Not trying is worse than trying because if you don't try then you are destined for failure. For if you try at least you have a chance it's small but it's still a chance towards success. Imagine life is like a stairway that keeps breaking behind you for if you don't try or do nothing then the step your on will inevitably break and then you begin falling into the abyss called failure forever broken forever falling forever lost in the labyrinth of failure because you didn't try your in this abyss of failure.
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Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
Is the internal logic consistent?
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Edward nigma
4 years 11 months ago
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Edward nigma
4 years 11 months ago
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