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Triskelion
Triskelion
Nov 30, 2024 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

...not a word...

There once was a lad name of Hannigan
who loved a polygamous mannequin
he was hot, she was cold
but her husbands all hold
polyamorous polyshenanigans

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Silliness abounds..thought funny, the word "shenanigans" feel free to post raspberries..

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

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Comments

Lavender

Lavender

7 months 2 weeks ago

...not a word...

Hello, Thomas,
This is wonderfully polyhumorous!
Ingenious! (No raspberries...)
L

Triskelion

Triskelion

6 months 4 weeks ago

..I was..

...browsing a clothing shop and in the midst of the displays, I heard the word shenanigans...you can take it from there.
Thanks Ruby Lord! I always appreciate a line from you!

Thomas