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Not Of This World (morphing version for shop)
There I am
Standing here ignoring you
it seems.
For I'm in my mind
elsewhere with my muse.
Maybe you see me looking up
watching contrails or geese
with an inaudible sigh.
Give me some tolerance please
Does it seem I only visit here
occasionally at random?
I'm checking on those whom I hold dear
and try to write a poem or two.
Beyond these trails is my true home
where trees are tall and hills are steep,
the places where the wild things live
not among the human sheep.
So let me walk my wilding way
each day at least a little while
that world of green and mossy gray
which lends to me this quiet smile.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
3 years 10 months ago
Well
..it certainly does make a subtle change to structured rhyme. Do you have a recipe you use as a baseline?
Thomas
scribbler
3 years 10 months ago
Hi Thomas
There is no set formula other than the change needs to be gradual and complete.