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Jul 18, 2012
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Nothing is worth more than this day (Goethe) - an acrostic
nebulous wandering
over epochs of eternities
time
heaping unto us
infinite
nows
gifting our becoming
interweaving
souls into a
wonder of miracles
orbiting aeons
rhythmically
tracing sketches and profiles of
heroes and heroines
manifesting in an
orgy of
revolution, turmoil
entities colliding
transmuting
happiness and sorrow
and in this particular
now
tide moved to encourage, and
hour
in its infinite wisdom
supported my plea, so
divinity
aligned destiny, preparing a place where
you and I could meet
.
.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
13 years ago
Judy
A lovely Acrostic work , some find them hard , but there are other forms that are very hard in the Acrostic way but this is fine and well written,
Yours Ian.T
judyanne
13 years ago
thank you ian
for the kind review
love judy
xxx
Kailashana2
13 years ago
Wow. You said a mouthful,
Wow. You said a mouthful, quite elegantly I might add.
~A
judyanne
13 years ago
dear anna
thank you very much :)
love judy
xxx
scribbler
13 years ago
Hi Judy
I do well to do acrostics with one syllable words lol. Now if you Really want to show off make it rhyme lmao...........stan PS meter was a bit off (couldn't help myself lol)
judyanne
13 years ago
haha - very funny scribbles
love judy
xxx