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Apr 16, 2013
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o my not again
Blonde waitress
now you challenge me
Blonde waitress
a solo guy watches
all come and go
which one will come
then not go
awaiting some one
who has failed to come...
get up sailor
your time has come
God has sent you a free gift
go the
Blonde one
now lift
and
be this the aim of your life
do justice
as you may wish
sailor now you ought to be happy
the night is still young
a new story
has now sprung
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Josephus
12 years 3 months ago
Loved, my sweet friend
Well my sweet friend, I see you have found another muse to draw inspiration from. My pleasure!
Joe
loved
12 years 3 months ago
we will be good friends
I assure you
you read me
and i shall too
tc
Seren
12 years 3 months ago
Loved
this one really needs clarifying its a little bit of a mess and needs to be edited with a few words taken out and a few more thrown in
you have the skills to do this ;)
love JC x
loved
12 years 3 months ago
which out
which in
do pitch in