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lovedly
lovedly
Jul 06, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

O O O give me a kiss eh

O O O give me a kiss eh

hahaahahaaaaa
you said it friend

give me a kiss eh
never give in

when loss is assured
you may still win

I always advise my kids/gcs

''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET
but do ask
IT MAY BECOME A
YES''

Else how will it ever
if you remain silent

They smile and say
give a 100 dollars
right away

I can only afford ten
they take it are happy
then run away
quickly return
kiss my cheeks for free
I smile
and be happy
won't you all too be!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This one is a sequel to the last kissy poem of mine. HOW TO GIVE A KISS ...across the INTERNET ... A VERY WELL READ POEM is this You'll love it

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years ago

dear lovedly,

''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET
but do ask
IT MAY BECOME A
YES''

Else how will it ever
if you remain silent

so very true!
*love, Cat

Geezer

Geezer

3 years ago

Now, there...

is a positive poem! So much nicer and uplifting! Yes, your pocket always has a no, but it can become a yes.
I had an acquaintance, that used to say that the reason he had so many girl-friends, was that he asked all that he liked,
eventually, one would respond to him. He said that if he asked a hundred, and ninety-nine said no, one said yes!
Nice to see a positive post, from my good friend lovedly. See? I asked for a nice, positive poem and I got a yes! ~ Geez.
.

lovedly

lovedly

3 years ago

HIGH GEE

I'm always for a yes
only one has to ask
i had given two yeses to u
second u need to read
say yes to,,,lol G
IN LIFE
accept all yeses and no's
to be happyyyyyyyyyyyyy