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Neopoem Of The Week October 16th to October 22 2022
O OOOO Maaaaaa GUY...
OMG all know
'tis a mark of exclamation
what!
Now listen to me...
I was dressed as a girl for five years
sent to a convent clothed so little exposed
fairer than fair skin may be a girl with in
till
One day my lovely kid teacher maybe then seventeen
took me to the petrichor field
it just rained a drop or two
she sat open wide couldn't hide
I jumped and then realized the difference
Ran homewards a mile long
she ran but breathless not strong
I told mom tomorrow no convent
she agreed
sweet girl have a glass of water my kid will now not come hereafter She smiled yes ma'am and waved then back to school thereafter
OH MY GUY!
Sweet boy!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Life is fun
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
ma guy
waiting to be read still
jack is still running up his HILL
so will come Jill....
O M G???????