Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 9th to October 15th 2022

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October in Wisconsin

OCTOBER IN WISCONSIN
When I ponder on October I think of certain hues,
Yellow, reds, and oranges, and even greens and blues.

What contrasts lie in forests, with its larger slew of trees,
When we take the time to wonder, our senses they may please.

But when we know that many will soon appear dry bones,
It seems a sad intrusion,which causes greatest moans.

Yet, we know our Maker, when flowers do appear,
He brings us spring and summer at another time of year.

Winter may bring dry bones, and dull our senses down,
But it causes new beginnings, as next season comes around.
Copyright 2022, Kathryn Search

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: WI,USA

Favorite Poets: King David, , other Bible poets, , some nature writers.

Comments

Geezer

2 years 9 months ago

Very nice...

A greeting card greeting!
Nice little poem that makes one think.
The language is fine, the beginning and the flow
make a consistent little thought for the day.
A reminder that seasons come and go with regularity
and we can always count on Mother Nature.
~ Geezer.
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search4agape

2 years 9 months ago