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lovedly
lovedly
May 25, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Ode to Passionate Modern Lovers

Passion rarely dies
even@75
and
Aussies are too
gay
many
passionate
all know it

I love the beach
and your sunny
sun down the ocean
snap its a beauty
have you ever read me my
Moms Smiles
do please

and

NOW THIS
when riders ride
they ride like

ALEXANDER THE GREAT

They never look back
were's my valet
and now
do read this

Lovely must have been
her ass
or horse's
will you help
find hers

coz she wears nothing but
her butt
and
smile

in the kids swimming pool
I have lost her
romantic heart
'twas only for me
.
so I have been
looking for her
in the sea

she has nothing on
but
glee

smile please

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

5 years 1 month ago

LoL...

Echoes of bewilderment! Sometimes, you unknowingly say the best things, lovedly.
~ Geezer.
.

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 1 month ago

hello Gee

I think only you understand
lovedly
thanx

Gracy

Gracy

5 years 1 month ago

Dear lovedly, I'm kinda

Dear lovedly, I'm kinda confused by your poem. I understand, but it's a bit much, sort of wandering, what with Alexander the Great and all that. Will return when my mind works better.