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Dec 03, 2010
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Oh! Dear Tanya!
Oh! Dear Tanya!
Tanya you do allure
I shall return
Surely for some more
What?
Clues of course
Where in this ocean of time
Can a soul searcher find?
A friend of thy kind,
In the vastness of the wilderness
They say it’s like eternity
I call it the trinity
Of
Life, body and soul,
Where we all strive
To become one whole
So Tanya till that day
Just hold my hand
I shall return
With the noisiest band
As I hope to some day,
Tanya surely happen
To come
Thy elusive way
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lou
14 years 7 months ago
Loved
Good write,
lou
loved
14 years 7 months ago
thanks
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