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Oh! Someone
Oh! Someone
Someone somewhere
awaits for me
behind the pillar of time
stands someone
some where
Who
we all don't know
but some one
some where
we all know
awaits for us
but who and when
none will know
this alone is the secret of life
we all know
some one
somewhere waits for me
who knows
If you are the one
waiting for me
come over will thee early
someone somewhere is calling out for me
who could that someone be
can anyone just whisper
into my ears for me
who that one hiding
could mean to me
Yes someone is there
in the mist of time
I can see
is he coming from Niagara
just ask for me
someone will ye...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
trekker
7 years 3 months ago
Oh Someone
I like the directness of this piece. You don't waist words but still give cause to ponder the state of relationships in society and how it is changing. Well done and thank you.
trekker
lovedly
7 years 3 months ago
thank u trekker
4 ur maiden visit u may like rosey me poetry unread still