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Once More, With Love..For Stream Lovers

Once More, With Love
Each one on this old,
now new Neopoet
is a classic
I learn from the very core
that each one of you reveals
from the fathoms
of your hearts!
How I wish I too had
Such a fathomless heart,
As love sinks deep
In each poem I read
My mind does plead
Oh Loved
When wilt thou accomplish
Such a deed
I wonder and shudder
That’s all indeed.
Your poetries are jewels
Strewn across the Internet
I have by now fully screened
But nothing comes in-between
Neopoet and betwixt us all
that’s all
what I really mean.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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loved

loved

13 years 11 months ago

Once more with love

This one was composed
Long ago as a blog
Then converted into a poem
And
Then unpublished owing to unsavoury comments
And
Now reposted coz I knew
Your love for the miniature bard was true
And so I thank you

S

scribbler

13 years 11 months ago

hi loved

I thought this looked a bit familiar. As best I can recall this is a great deal better that the original. Keep on keeping on lol........stan