One Day in September

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Consider examining the poem's use of language and imagery, particularly the choice of words like "horde," which may unintentionally generalize or oversimplify complex historical events. The poem could benefit from more nuanced or specific language to better reflect the gravity and complexity of the subject matter. Additionally, the line "The world didn't breathe" is somewhat abstract; consider clarifying or expanding this metaphor to strengthen its emotional impact. The poem's pacing is rapid, which suits the urgency of the event, but exploring moments of pause or reflection might enhance the reader's emotional connection. Finally, the phrase "Let's roll!" is historically significant; consider contextualizing or integrating it more clearly to ensure its resonance is fully understood by all readers.

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in agreement with the AI on this one. I do think that while the day's events unfolded rather quickly one after another, that your poem does not express the surprise we, [and the world] felt; that while we knew that other countries were having such difficulties, we never expected that WE the United States, the best country in the world, would ever be subjected to such an embarrassment, because we are the "good guys". You did, however, manage to convey the emotional context of our willingness to do whatever we have to do to prevent the "bad guys" from winning. ~ Geezer.
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I still remember that day so clearly even some 24 years later. The bravery of those who sacrificed themselves and saved even more will never be forgotten.
Wonderful tribute.