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Sep 19, 2020
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The One Handed Typist(Critique Workshop)
oh the shades of blues
the blacks are quite an accent
I await the hues oh yellows and greens
with excited anticipation
twice the size it used to be
it looks like stay puffs hand
with layers upon layers of gauze
and bands
single keys each one I press
none of this is meant to impress
only that I do better typing one finger then ten
so now I come to sudden end
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
c lynn brooks
4 years 9 months ago
jerry
thank
i will try
Geezer
4 years 9 months ago
Yes, welcome back...
our star pupil in the workshop, is a fantastic study. [Not to mention a fan of mine] LoL. I am impressed with her critique and wish that she could be accompanied by the rest of the people that signed up for the workshop. You are right about your typing, you do much better with your one hand than with two. Maybe now the other one will help instead of getting in the way?
Gee.
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c lynn brooks
4 years 9 months ago
Gee
tks Yes I Am quite pleased with the way she progressed
lol
tks yes I am pleased with her progress I'm Not back full steam not until I can take the mountain of bandages off (Tuesday) then it is just one big bandaid on the heel of my hand
i'm try
c lynn brooks
4 years 9 months ago
teddy
lol
about 15 minutes
Gracy
4 years 9 months ago
Dear lynn, so glad you're
Dear lynn, so glad you're back from the hospital and typing such good poems with one finger.
I understand that the bandages will come off soon. Hope you're not in pain? I'll return to this one and hope I'll have time to visit your workshop.
Get well soon, Gracy
c lynn brooks
4 years 9 months ago
teddy
you are just too cute lol tks i just threw this one together for the ws and the fun of it