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One way to get back in the swing

There was a poet whose work
Caused his readers great irk
But now he has joy
By the quite simple ploy
Of critiquing just like a jerk

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

12 years 7 months ago

Hi Jess

Glad to see your poems. They are a work of Art. Hope all is well with you.
My friend.

Race_9togo

Race_9togo

12 years 7 months ago

Jess,

Simply = simple, maybe?

Still laughing!

BettyBuff

BettyBuff

12 years 7 months ago

LOL...

That's a mischievous piece...glad to see you've still "got it!"...

(Hug) Ells x

weirdelf

weirdelf

12 years 7 months ago

I'm back!

Sometimes harsh, sometimes kind, but always honest.