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Dec 12, 2012
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One way to get back in the swing
There was a poet whose work
Caused his readers great irk
But now he has joy
By the quite simple ploy
Of critiquing just like a jerk
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
12 years 7 months ago
Hi Jess
Glad to see your poems. They are a work of Art. Hope all is well with you.
My friend.
Race_9togo
12 years 7 months ago
Jess,
Simply = simple, maybe?
Still laughing!
weirdelf
12 years 7 months ago
thank you
well spotted.
Fixed
BettyBuff
12 years 7 months ago
LOL...
That's a mischievous piece...glad to see you've still "got it!"...
(Hug) Ells x
weirdelf
12 years 7 months ago
I'm back!
Sometimes harsh, sometimes kind, but always honest.
William Saint George
12 years 7 months ago
That poet, sir,
is YOU!
weirdelf
12 years 7 months ago
All verse is free
unless it's bad.
loved
12 years 7 months ago
harsh, AT times kind, ....but
million perscent
honest.
Barbara Writes
12 years 7 months ago
Yea honest is you Jess
Honesty free the soul of desert mirages in poetic writings.