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Dec 12, 2012
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One way to get back in the swing
There was a poet whose work
Caused his readers great irk
But now he has joy
By the quite simple ploy
Of critiquing just like a jerk
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
12 years 10 months ago
Hi Jess
Glad to see your poems. They are a work of Art. Hope all is well with you.
My friend.
Race_9togo
12 years 10 months ago
Jess,
Simply = simple, maybe?
Still laughing!
weirdelf
12 years 10 months ago
thank you
well spotted.
Fixed
BettyBuff
12 years 10 months ago
LOL...
That's a mischievous piece...glad to see you've still "got it!"...
(Hug) Ells x
weirdelf
12 years 10 months ago
I'm back!
Sometimes harsh, sometimes kind, but always honest.
William Saint George
12 years 10 months ago
That poet, sir,
is YOU!
weirdelf
12 years 10 months ago
All verse is free
unless it's bad.
loved
12 years 10 months ago
harsh, AT times kind, ....but
million perscent
honest.
Barbara Writes
12 years 10 months ago
Yea honest is you Jess
Honesty free the soul of desert mirages in poetic writings.