ONLY THREE CHOICES...EDIT

Each one of us
in life has three choices
but we all need to exercise one only

Either give in fully
give up totally
finally
fight with all your might
win or fail
let it be immaterial

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Geezer

2 years 9 months ago

Some wise words...

from an elder. Hmmm, I would delete the [else, and just make it give in totally] Either give in fully
.give up totally
finally
. fight with all your might
~ Geez.
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lovedly

2 years 9 months ago

Thanks GEE

Shall see

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 9 months ago

I love this. I’m crying a little. This is hard to see from where I am in my life. Between these kids and the dog and all the running around, I’m basically just driving around half numb or completely sobbing. Every day is a fight and today the fight was extra long and fairly brutal. I really needed to read this tonight, at that particular time. It needed to be “immaterial “.

“Poetry is more about learning…” touché.

Spectacular,
Tim