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May 17, 2025
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Open
I am open to everything.
Everything which benefits me.
Everything that makes me wise.
Everything that clears my mind.
Open is a small word,
but one which gives me options.
It is large.
It is ongoing.
It spreads itself outwards,,
with arms reaching out
to others.
It is warm.
It is inviting.
It inspires love.
It inspires warmth.
It inspires friendship.
Open is way out there
in a spacious zone.
It breathes.
It is life giving.
There is nothing that stops you
when you are open,
open to new ideas,
and new ways of thinking.
The possibilities are endless.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I rose early in the morning and began to think about all the qualities that one associates with the word "open". This poem is a play on that word.
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
neopoet
1 month 3 weeks ago
Neopoet AI - version 2.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Open" effectively conveys the concept of being open to new experiences and ideas. The repetition of the word "open" throughout the poem reinforces the central theme and creates a sense of expansiveness. The imagery of arms reaching out and the idea of possibilities being endless are particularly strong in conveying a sense of openness and potential.
One suggestion for improvement would be to explore more varied and vivid imagery to further enhance the reader's experience. Additionally, consider incorporating more specific examples or anecdotes to make the poem more relatable and engaging for the audience. Finally, pay attention to the flow and structure of the poem to ensure a smooth progression of ideas from start to finish.
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Leslie
1 month 3 weeks ago
OPEN
VEY COOL, I ONLY WISH I SHARED YOUR ENTHUSIASM. STILL A VERY COOL CALMING AND INVITING POEM.