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Feb 09, 2015
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open ALL doors
do remind me
Sparoe /ion
when the doors are about to close
I shall then enter
through your open door
and open a pandora's door
(OKAY NO METAPHOR THEN BOX..)
beware lots of bees will be there
keep your door secure
and locked
or have a fire near by
ere the bees stick to yours
doors friends
what else ?
happens
behind closed doors....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
10 years 5 months ago
Loved
If and when I do go through any of those doors and there are bees there they will do me no harm as we will all be as one,
Take care, this is not a poem and may gather criticism from a few sources lol,
Yours Ian
lovedly
10 years 5 months ago
a rolling stone gathers
no moss
at least i roll to collect some
what of criticism are you afraid
let some my way come