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Jackweb

Jan 09, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

OUR EXISTENCE

the rebellion of mankind
a sting to civilization
what a tyrannical world

©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Imo State - Republic of Biafra(Nigeria), NGA

Favorite Poets: Late Christopher Okigbo, Wole soyinka, Maya Angelou, W.H. Longfellow, John Milton, W.B. Yeat.

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Comments

2 years 6 months ago

yes!

it is...it really is!

how are you doing? you sound down in the dumps. should we be worried? nice poem.

*hugs, Cat

2 years 6 months ago

Thanks Cat!

Yeah, I am. You got it right Cat!
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2 years 6 months ago

dear Onyineche,

I hope you get through your rough patch okay. yesterday we got an estimate on repairing our roof because of ice damage: 22,000 $ I hope he takes payments.

love & hugs, Cat

2 years 6 months ago

Will definitely pass through it!

Much appreciated for your concern. Wow, that's a huge amount of money for repairing. Indeed, this is a very high budget!
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2 years 6 months ago

why shout man

Title un -cap
It's like one is shouting

2 years 6 months ago

LoL!

Lovedly, I was not shouting... I have been writing all my titles that way. Check all my posts.

Thanks for stopping by.
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Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 6 months ago

Indeed

Couldn’t agree more. Could disagree until I was out breath. Truly I think it’s everything.

Excellent writing
Tim

2 years 6 months ago

I will

Always appreciate you for stopping by, for reading and commenting.
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2 years 6 months ago

Our Existence

Hi, Jackweb,
Oppression in humans will only last so long, and then it takes shape in uprisings. Your title gives one a lot to think about.
L

2 years 6 months ago

What a clear view!

Perfectly seen! Sometimes I wonder how you understand things deeper. You're one of the sage men here. Thanks for reading and reviewing! .
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