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Mar 30, 2020
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Owlish Night Visions
Standing at the edge of rapidly moving time
all Neopoets ask me to at mid night rhyme .
It's time for me to be standing
on the only cliff at half past nine
will the wind blow me off like a sand mine
or shall I myself need to take off
the Virus is it's siren blowing
Ha poet for you I am coming
stay tuned
fly not away
the cyclone is on its way
wait for a while
in magnificent style
time will tell
what you did boldly
hopefully not cowardly
the wind will be coming soon
hold on still
consider it as a boon
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 3 months ago
Becoming?...
I'm sure you meant be coming. ~ Geezer.
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c lynn brooks
5 years 3 months ago
lovedly
like a sand mine ( what is this)
not your usual style rhyme sounds forced
having an off day are we?
lovedly
5 years 3 months ago
will recast
soonly fast
rhyme must last
sand mine is like quick silver
wet marsh