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Jan 16, 2012
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P H E L L
there are shadows
written on the land
like bloodstained
pursuits
like abandoned holy grounds
where sacred spirits dwell
where snow falls
the dead ash of ideals
there are stirring currents
flickering
brilliant like the hot want
of sunlight on a chilled day
and Moons swift in passage
through a month of pain
for all the lost
and all the found
the truths will
be
and all shall see
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 5 months ago
Flawless.
nothing more to say.
Esker
13 years 5 months ago
Phlaw less
Crikey mate LIke yer beard Eh! Will hoist a can of Dinky Di and have dinner on yah !
thanks!
Nordic cloud
13 years 5 months ago
Shakespearean Phelling
Shakespearean Phelling
compelling intense
rolling breakers out at sea.
Ann