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Oct 13, 2012
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.............................p a r e r e
stillborn winds
stir
the current
takes them
an ocean of night
deep thick
I am just
a dreaming
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Ian.T
12 years 9 months ago
Steve
The only Translation I can find for this is "I Obey"
Then all these things you say should no matter not Obey....
Yours Ian.T
Is it the rules of motion, or just a natural thing????