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.............................p a r e r e

stillborn winds
stir

the current
takes them

an ocean of night
deep thick

I am just
a dreaming

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 9 months ago

Steve

The only Translation I can find for this is "I Obey"
Then all these things you say should no matter not Obey....
Yours Ian.T
Is it the rules of motion, or just a natural thing????