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May 18, 2012
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Packing Prayer
Come Beloved
as a strong wind
blow
through my life
seperate
the wheat from the chaff
Help me
to love them both
the good
the bad
the everything
for it has brought me
Here
brought me
back
to You
Aid me
in letting go
of all this
stuff
these things
these strings
and attachments
So there might be room
for nothing else
but Love
among these boxes
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Last post for a while, we're off on a family road trip (for who knows how long) and will most likely be without internet. Massive love to you all xxx
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Kailashana2
13 years 1 month ago
Enjoy each other and see all
Enjoy each other and see all those things most of us take for granted in our busy lives.
It's an amazing thing to see the Beloved in all that is.
~A
faerybeki
13 years 1 month ago
Ahhh yes, we intend on
Ahhh yes, we intend on embracing it all :) much love to you dear Anna xxx
believe
13 years 1 month ago
commitement
MMM This spells commitment to me,
I like the the analogy description of having to re-sort ones life to accommodate,
and let go other things from the past .
Nice one !