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lovedly
lovedly
Apr 30, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Paint me red

Paint me red

I paint a light
when tis darkness and others can't see
Fluorescence paint is needed for me
to ensure they can see
my silhouette
out in the darkness
a vision of the only one
of a kind of me

your own take friend
that's me.....
now there is no more glee
no light for me
this is what I in your poetry see
won’t call it blasphemy
as distance alone
lends beauty to a scene

we have once good friends been...
haven’t we?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 2 months ago

thanks Jess

u say I am no poet---------------------------------
some ones gave me a
BRONZE
for this.... u also call a gem thanks

i write once in a while
as earthquakes aren't too often
regards
medicine and meditation are ur panacea j\friend

Rula

Rula

10 years 2 months ago

There is creativity

and I like the idea of "Fluorescence paint"
You shine beloved without the flurenscene paint. You do with your unique style.
welcome back.