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Aug 21, 2023
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week August 20th To August 25th 2023
PALM
PALM
My palm, when an inked print is made
Is as stems growing in an Eastern jungle
An attempt to display those Nazca lines
Or an early drawn map of the Nile delta
Four main lines and many smaller ones
Each with significance to some who know
And to one side is a faint diagonal mesh
Perhaps a net to catch an interpretation
But wait, there’s also the right and left
Each with a different take and tale to tell
One is inheritance from when first born
The other reflecting life’s ups and downs
But gender turns left and right around
The seven mounts are each an indicator
As named planets, plus sun and moon
But fingerprints remain your identity
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Geezer
1 year 11 months ago
I like it...
but I definitely would have called it "Hands."
~ Geezer.
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