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Nov 18, 2016
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PALOR
PALOR
there is no going back ;
there is only rushing forward
I look behind and see beyond horizons
worn by Time’s passing tears,
now filled with shadows who
shared a lifetime…..
colorless specters in refraction,
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
8 years 7 months ago
joe
this is simply wonderful
Alid
jane210660
8 years 7 months ago
Beautiful
This is beautiful Joe. Jx
judyanne
8 years 7 months ago
I am in awe
I have no words Joe...
one tiny crit... do you need the word 'beyond'?
Bookmarked.
I intend to memorise this.
Love Judy
xxx
Candlewitch
8 years 7 months ago
hello :)
wonderful write...leaves me quite breathless :)
*hugs, Cat
Geremia
8 years 7 months ago
THANK YOU, ALL JOE
THANK YOU, ALL
JOE