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Jan 02, 2011
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Paradise Gained
Paradise Gained
You've paved a way,
To paradise you say,
You have a heart
And
need no brains any way
So now that you reside
In paradise all day
Donate your head and brains,
If any, to strangers
Who stray thy way?
Keep your heart anyway
Brains are a waste
Throw them away,
Yes that’s right
Straight away
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
14 years 6 months ago
gained
there is a lot lost by those who over think things. well put...............scribbler
loved
14 years 6 months ago
THANKS
As the new year has dawned
once again
i wish you a very many
happier a morn
and many more ,
many more
such dawns