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Oct 06, 2011
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Paradox
Seems what ever I say
it turns around and bites me in the arse.
Whatever I do it's wrong.
Some my label me a victim.
Well I say fuck them and shit on that,
I don't conform, you won't bring me down.
I can never win I won't let my self
If you don't beat me then I will.
But don't be fooled
I will fight back tooth and nail.
I'm a paradox, on the one hand I'll kick your arse
On the other I'm as fragile as bone china.
I have hard crust but an oozy gooey centre.
I'm easily maimed .
But I can't be tamed.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Kailashana2
13 years 9 months ago
It seems to me that you don't
It seems to me that you don't care much for my opinion enough to ever acknowledge my presence on your poem. That's ok, I'll say it anyway: an awesome poem. Probably your best and tells you like you are. And that's a good thing, self-acceptance is the best gift
we can ever give ourselves.
However, not one of us is a paradox, we're comprised of seeming opposite energies...
~A
lou
13 years 9 months ago
I don't know what your talking about
I always respond.
Thank you
Lou
lou
13 years 9 months ago
Xena
I am very bad at punctuation
Thanks
Lou