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Dec 21, 2016
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PARTING
PARTING
I will be an angel on your shoulder
whispering in your ear
not to cry. not to fear
and never despair ,
you see : how could i
let you know
the pain of loneliness…
I will still be here
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
8 years 6 months ago
Hi there!
Really admire your passion, bro. Another good write. Kudos to you.
Alid
valene
8 years 6 months ago
From the heart
When I read this, it touched my heart....I think because it comes from the heart!
The opening line is so touching and from there your words continue to carry out your message!
Well done!
valene
lovedly
8 years 6 months ago
you will remain
Joe in hearts of poets
who love contain
u will
surely remain