in passing the twilight..... friends

see us in golden light

as emerges the
ultimate night

let memories for ever remain bright
when we all are out of sight

till then many a candle light!
while you can
continue the fight
alright!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

alidzain

10 years 9 months ago

loved this

Death may steal one's soul
but memories are ours to keep
until they grow so old
from our mind, they'll slip

Still the feelings still there
the key to their revival
it will always be there somewhere
be it free or entangled

so fear not the coming of the night
for my love is the blanket keeping you warm
my prayers will grant you the light
and shield you from the coming storm

Alid

Geremia

10 years 9 months ago

Splendid poetry. joe

Splendid poetry.

joe

alidzain

10 years 9 months ago

Thank you. Yours is just as

Thank you. Yours is just as good.

Alid

lovedly

10 years 9 months ago

thanks Joe

you really encourage me
Hope you shall continue to do
all the best take good care
the sun has not set
as yet!