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Rosewood Apothecary
Rosewood Apothecary
Jan 12, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week January 8th to January 14th 2023

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Passion Flower (disclaimer erotica)

Open up your world to me
Flower of your passion
Smell and taste of your perfume
Aesthetic of your fashion

Kiss delivered to your rose
Soft and delicate
Your petals growing into me
Dark and intricate

Blooming, pulsing, moving with
Pressures are applied
Pleasures are now building
And so I must abide

Tension growing towards release
Spasms taking hold
Nectar fills my mouth’s embrace
Which made your bloom explode

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.

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Comments

Hon

Hon

2 years 5 months ago

A beautiful written poem

Hi, Rosewood, a very beautiful written poem about a love theme with many well descriptive imaginary usage of word and metaphor. Simple but get to the point. Many figurative languages. This is the best poem that it stood out so far. Here are some example of the word usage that I like it.
“Open up your world to me”
Smell and taste of your perfume
Your petals are growing into me
“. “

Thank you and keep it up

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 5 months ago

Nice job

Erotic yet tasteful! Written with your usual passion and charm! Great job!!