Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Pause the guns
So much to be done in a small human space,
such turmoil within, without disgrace
If all that conformity needs us to be
a shingle in the roof that reality
Requires, to shelter us from rebels that fall
like plummeting lead shot, molten in balls
From within the time-ticking eye, we call sanity,
Pause for a while and think on it all
Were you wrenched from the womb to subsist?
or did you come, willing traveller, answering the call
To thrive, more than exist?
Caught in a madman’s' vision of pain
Don't let custom overwhelm, nor haul you
from that simple miracle, you became-
Nor believe the fraught voices, without, within,
you have nothing at all to explain
Just this thought: be good, at what you do,
and are - pure, gentle, lost but humane.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
9 years 4 months ago
love this, man
its laden with thoughts.
Alid
vandiemenspeak
9 years 4 months ago
Thanks Alid!
May the guns stay paused permanently, both those inside, and those outside of us ;) - Just a little meditation. Love your avatar pic by the way, is he/she Wing Chun?
Take care.
Chris.
alidzain
9 years 4 months ago
Yo Chris
No, its silat. (I believe the martial art originates from the malays during the sultanate era.
Alid
vandiemenspeak
9 years 4 months ago
Cool, I'll have to look that one up..
It's an interesting topic and a region where history is often overlooked.
Thanks.
Chris.
Roscoe Lane
9 years 4 months ago
I agree,
I agree with the every sentiment expressed in this poem. Well written . Regards Roscoe
vandiemenspeak
9 years 4 months ago
Cheers Roscoe..
Always good to hear from someone who's seeing/understanding the same things unfolding in this mad world..
Thanks.
Chris.