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Jan 29, 2018
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Pensive Native:
When we scorn, we lose
Walk a mile in others shoes
Don’t judge, let them choose
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Native gold
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
raj
7 years 5 months ago
Good message scripted in the
Good message scripted in the Haiku/Senryu...especially the need to be empathetic rather than being impulsively judgemental...
Regards...
OriginalRhyku
7 years 5 months ago
Raj, appreciate your
Raj, appreciate your constructive comments. Thanks.
OriginalRhyku
7 years 5 months ago
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