A Pensive Platform

could be Travel Log, a befitting title for your descriptive poem. I used to travel by train, especially while touring Europe. This brings back memories. So very nicely written!!
Ali

says s lot with a little.
To me you are in a train station, and just painting a picture like an Edward Hopper painting. It feels to me like a commuter (distance is short). To me the writer seems tired,and lost to a vacant state. a photograph.
So the title doesn't work for me. I don't see the poem in terms of travel, that's not what the poem is about to me, and certainly not bloging...the poem has too much inner tension. such as
The seat that I sit on
Is comfortably stiff
Many before me have
Sat here, I guess

but I appreciate the cleanly done meter.

Oh, now I'm listening hard. This is the only verse I have trouble with. It is unrelated to the rest of the meter.

This is straight forward as to meaning. Just a snippet of ordinary life. I think the heart of the poem is the two lines :
distance is short
lived from afar.
You might consider rereading this as far as capitalization goes though......stan

Capitalizing each line of a poem is an old, antique mode whose day is gone. Better to use correct grammar and capitalize only when necessary and correct. Personally, I can't stand it when each line is capitalized to make it "look" like a poem, but in the end... it is your poem.

I did three takes. It's up to you to decide whether that is of any significance.
Love the poem, glad you improved the title.
Here's the reading.
https://soundcloud.com/neopoet/a-pensive-platform-by-scatterhatter