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Apr 24, 2011
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Perfec Twirld
I'm writing from my memories
for, they tend to lead the way,
to a time where I possessed the keys
but, couldn't sieze the day.
I tremble with embarrassement
it's awkward that I'm me,
as I dilligently pay my dues
others live thier lives "scott free"!
These days, it seems I'm gullible
to think that what I dream,
if my dreams were even possible
we could be on the same team.
All in all, there is great wisdom
in promoting a world that's true,
we'll live in a special kingdom
where you love me, and I love you.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
docmaverick
14 years 2 months ago
Ian....
...it was supposed to have been something completely different, had to let go of this child. This one had a mind of it's own.
thanx, and happy keester bunny day!
doc.