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May 19, 2016
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Pharmakos [Scapegoat] edit
PHARMAKOS
the world I knew had never seen
a madness such as this
for Man has fallen a second time
and there is no Lamb to crucify;
was one man’s Blood not precious
enough to satisfy this God’s fury
for the failure of Creation:
we are lost in a never-ending vortex
of transgression and retribution
’
and sadly n many ways, we are
Victim and Executioner.
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
9 years 1 month ago
another good write Joe
Can I suggest you punctuate this....?
love judy
xxx
Geremia
9 years 1 month ago
ok
ok
lovedly
9 years 1 month ago
another abstract
and
creative work
Joe you are the forerunner on NEO