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Apr 19, 2016
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PHASES
PHASES
Each beginning has an end
and each end brings us to
one more beginning,, one more end.
like the phases of the moon we die
to the world we know to rise again
different and the same.
the years push us to change and grow,
rise and fall, until we can rise no more
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
9 years 3 months ago
your typing is
gain under control
Joe roll
Geremia
9 years 3 months ago
actually, it was Richard.
actually, it was Richard. thanks for reading me, my friend.
joe for joe
lovedly
9 years 3 months ago
twas good
thanks to Richard too
Joe we all know
raj
9 years 3 months ago
Hi Joe
Journey of the soul very nicely scripted in these verses Joe...
Warm regards,
Geremia
9 years 3 months ago
thank you, Raj; it is a
thank you, Raj; it is a difficult road, isn't it.
joe
Keith Logan
9 years 3 months ago
Wow
so deep man.
But tightly written.
Geremia
9 years 3 months ago
Thank you, Keith. The impact
Thank you, Keith. The impact of the message s the simplicity of form.
joe