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emeka ozurumba
emeka ozurumba
Feb 03, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

phonograph a gun

* politicians use the front door o
what for , asterisk
score
tore!
toe!

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria , abuja

Favorite Poets: christopher okigbo, wole soyinka, gabriel okara , odiah ofeimun- john keats, p.b shelley

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Comments

Rula

Rula

11 years 5 months ago

Welcome to the Neo

I usually like brevity, sharp and straight to the point free verse, and
this is not an exceptional, yet the ending "toe !" is a bit hard bite.
Would really appreciate a hint if you care to get me a reader of yours :)

Again a very warm welcome.
Looking forward to reading more of your works.