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raj

Pillow Note # 3

Sweetheart
I know you are feeling Blue
so I wrote this note on Pink
to make you blush so Beau
like "Peaches"
my nick for You...

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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raj

14 years 6 months ago

Dearest Shirl...

i can just say WOW....what a lovely Pillow Note...who will ever say NO to "want to play Birds and bees" i am sure your Beau will go head over heals reading that..lol...

much love... and smiles..

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raj

14 years 6 months ago

Dearest JayCee

a good idea..we could all contribute to that collection...certainly for a worthy cause these pillow notes are supposed to do ...to light up the lives of spouses by re-kindling the flame of romance...

much love n smiles..

R

raj

14 years 6 months ago

Dearest Shirl..

wow again....thats an absolutely stimulating pillow note....surely a re-kindling stuff....

much love...