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Pillowed Dreams

while some
are ambitious
with dreams
to achieve,
I have mine pillowed
though I often could
hear them murmuring

"believe"

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Rula

Rula

12 years 2 months ago

hi joe

Sorry for the belated reply.
Very much appreciate the comment. Thank you

wesley snow

wesley snow

12 years 3 months ago

Beau's right.

Although the "English language is as the English speaking people speak it" (or write it ), technically "got" is not a word. There is never a reason to use it unless a character is speaking in a dialect that would use it. "Have" will always suffice.
Sweet poem Rula.

Rula

Rula

12 years 3 months ago

Thanks sir

English-excuse me- is a bit weird language, don't you think so?
Any learner would think that a word is a word as long as it is listed in the dictionary and is heard of the TV .
Ah! I learn something new everyday and the road is still long.:)
Thanks for the visit.

Rula

Rula

12 years 3 months ago

at least

this is a rule we learned a while ago

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Rula

As with Beau this is a very good piece..
When at school, in English, they would always say that, got, get and the plurals of the same, were weed words, and should be avoided as their English is not good..
I await others to confirm this as it was a long time ago, lol,
Yours Ian.T

Rula

Rula

12 years 3 months ago

Thanks all

For reading and for the helpful thoughts.I've edited accordingly

Rula

Rula

12 years 2 months ago

hi loved

Always appreciate your comment.thank you dear

nokros

nokros

12 years 2 months ago

You don't

pen like a rookie - impressive lines.

Rula

Rula

12 years 2 months ago

hi nokros

And many thanks for your lovely comment